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Re: Attempt at writing #2
An interesting short story. However, I'm not going to vote.
The story wasn't an abomination. It was an enjoyable short read. Others here are good at writing, I'm sure they can help you out. Just got to stay motivated to keep writing if that is what you want to do. Don't give up so easily like me.
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