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Yes, it seems to be the general response that people think it is rather short. My new plan is to revamp that a little and label it as Chapter 1. Chapter 2 would cover either the rest of the day, or about a 24 hours period. Probably. Everything is up in the air until I actually type it out on my word processor.
Glad to hear you are enjoying my story. I strongly encourage constructive criticism. If you like the story, tell me the parts; if you have problems with some parts, or even the concept itself, tell me what you think is wrong, and how to make it better.
That said... almost at 500 views. Coo~l!
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