Oh man, that was great. What a hilarious and awesome bait-and-switch with the end of the last chapter! I did not see that coming and it was pulled off beautifully. It also seems more realistic, as far as character reactions go, and therefore just makes the immersion that much stronger. I can't tell you how much I love this story and I get super excited every time you post an update.
I have to say, transgender is not normally one of my kinks but Chloe in Devin's body is just so hot. In all honesty. I'm really hoping there's some more dick growth too as that's one of my favourite fetishes, but basically anything you write will end up with me loving it.