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Originally Posted by Prof_Sai
Why does she keep shrinking when the lust turns to horror?
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"Little By Little" vaguely established that the shrinking itself functions as an aphrodisiac, and if a girl goes too far down she basically loses all control. That could explain it.
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Originally Posted by Vicky Mouse
Why do people like vore at all?
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I've never understood that, myself. But the fact is that some folks do. *shrug*
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Originally Posted by Rebikan
Agreed with Captain here. Treating the shrinking as a fully fleshed out comeuppance can make the shrinking that much more interesting. Say if Jessica had used to bully Becky, or had done some thing unforgivable to her that warranted this response.
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Raso, this is a great suggestion. Rather than revising your ending, you could consider revising your *beginning,* making it so that Jessica deserves what she gets. That would take a lot of the tragic bite out of it.