[godleydemon]

So I took quite a few minutes/hours during work between breaks/lunches to read several of your free stories on the site you listed there. I have to say, not a single story, "hit my buttons". One of the stories actually revulted me, "Friends Forever" about what seemed like two girls changing other girls and making them gain massive amounts of weight. There was a specific line in this story that caught my attention though, “Work out? No thanks,” Shelly said. “I like to keep up my curves for Tom and working out might make me thinner.”

This line is very reminiscent to the sub reddit fatpeoplestories. Many of the stories stress the fact and make fun of, over weight people who say, "I need to keep up my beautiful curves." When in fact they are disgusting blobs. Now I know there is a nice sub genre out there that does in fact like this process, so I can't really fault it to much, but it's what I'd like to call fat logic and it was revolting to see it put in a positive light.

Many times, in many stories, changes seem to happen because they need to happen and without a logical reason behind them. Like this person was mean and ridiculous to people, or ect. Tranformations, at least to me, need to be for a reason and not just "because", but that's probably just me.

Age progression seems to be a constant in your library and would be a decent selection for the age progression enthusiasts, except you focus more on old age progression more then young age progression. meaning an adult gets older till 70 which is a sub genre of a sub genre and very specific with a low reading count.

One particular story caught my interest, since it seemed someone really liked it. "Europe". Again this seems to fall more into the weight gain scenario, but it kind of painted a young woman, wanting to go out and explore Europe and have some fun with her youth. By the end the young woman had completely changed for the worse and turned into a blob and explained it off as “I spent my whole life in this small town - and then I traveled the world and grew up. What’s the big deal?” as if nothing actually happened and this was normal.

Again I have to reiterate, this is more of a weight gain enthusiast, but I found the entire story revolting and down right confusing to read. So, let's try and put my bias aside, because I'm sure your already tired of hearing about it. You write excellent weight gain stories and apparently for the people who like them, they really enjoy your writing style. Unfortunately, from what I've read, you don't seem to capture what Age Progression and Age Regression people are looking for.

I should note, if anyone out there is looking for old age progression, then he does have a couple of decent stories in his portfolio, but to be honest. As a Young Age Progression Fetishist and a Female Age Regression Fetishist, the stories range in the world of horror fiction for me.

These, are of course my opinions and not meant to be an offense, more as an observation and opinion, mixed with constructive crit.

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As a side note, my wife says I'm being mean and bullyish, so I apologize, I didn't mean to come off that way :/