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Originally Posted by katheb
It is very nice indeed.
Pic one :
Nice BG although it would be easier for you to draw the BG on a seperate paper and add it after you scan them into the PC.
Character pic 1 : She seems like she is falling to the left and not standing straight . the face from the side looks a little flat . and the hands needs more detail [and drawing practice]
Positioning Pic 1: What is the reason for the pic??? TO show the BG the charecter or her weapon ?
im assuming the main thing you want to show is the character having the rest secondary . that means the character should be near the center if you want to show more of the sword without losing focus of the character you might want to draw the sword pointing towards the viewer more instead of 100% side view.
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Pic 2 : the characters hand seems good but the rest of the pose is slightly off i recommend you draw a wire frame or a stick figure of the character to figure out tough poses before hand .
also the perspective is slightly off [i cant help you with this im not that good at perspective myself sadly] you may want to draw the perspective lines and the point of origin [wich is offscreen in this pic]
and the face looks good almost too good [I have seen that face before in a manga ] but maybe im seeing things .did you trace the face or copy it from some place ? if not then well done drawing it looks good.
pic 3 is perfect Woo!
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1 well ,the background.. really isnt easy to do seperate. with certain drawings maybe...
and to go through all of that is a tad bit of alot of work ..
as for the leaning .. see how the cliff she's standing on is positioned kinda at a tilted camera angle ? kinda like a bit of a overhead view
as for the pose her lowwer body is facing forward toward that mountain kingdom and she's looming over to the veiws some what her sword yeah it does have a plain perspective because i cant position though kind of objects right yet.
as for the face i drew it really small. it may seem bigger in the veiw your looking at cause of the resizing. so getting detail in ther was almost impossible since my wrist arent steady enough to pull that off quite yet ^^'
there wasnt really any meaning other then just wanting to draw a scenery and some sort of character in the mix then i just made her hips wider and breast big the weapon came last so i didnt put much detail into it . i just felt like giving her some sort of huge fang to be made inpressive that she's not one to mess aroound with but i rushed it at some point..
2 the left arm holding the mini weapon, her back and how her legs are positioned is the only thing i see wrong with the drawing and using wire frome just seems to be a waste time and a bugger to erase so i cant draw lightly well the rest of it i'll have to work on .
but as for the face no i didnt really copy much just borrowed, and i havent traced anything in a long time actually ^^;
the face just comes from past combined references i've studied of over the years.
though with the recent hentai i read from this board i used the sexual expression mix with a relaxing face. i dont think i got it quite right though something still bugs me about it. i think its her left cheek i may have mad it too high
3 lol thanks XD though speaking for all three pics her figure design was inspired by "spunky knight"
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though sad but true my style chages way to much and its pretty bad for some parts like i can draw almost realistic faces at some point but then i cant.
then it switches to undetailed anime character designs. to shapely bodies like the ones displayed here...
at some point i was questioned if a certian art was actually mine or not.. its because i used to much reference that my skills become unstable will trying to mold it into one whole different form. same goes for drawing forms like some times my roughs look better then my inks or my inks look better then my cg then my cg some times likes way to good that it out classes my others then im not able to use that same highly detailed cg style because i have a hard time remembering how its done XD so my style and interest vchange at random. and all these drawings your looking at right now are roughsketches (^o^)/)