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Captain Ash
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Re: Leaves of Change is now available SW GTS BE

Leaves of change is an interesting comic.

I think I will start with the most interesting part –
Characters:

For instance, there is this little skimpy dressed waitress Jade who is working in a night club.
I like her attitude to make the best of “unexpected” situations.
Jade is one of those girls you like to see not because she just shrinks.

Then we have Dean, the bartender.
It is good to see that he is not a “Ken” - archetype.
Usually men are there because they have to be there and are not important for the story.
But here he is a believable character who really interacts with others.
He has even a passion for one or the other kinks.

Last and least we have Lorna.
She is tall girl who will get even bigger.
Although I get the comic more for the shrinking part, it was fun seeing her getting bigger.

Besides the great story, the comic lives from its great dialogues.

Drawings:
The perspectives and face expressions are amazing (especially from Jade!).
However, the drawing style is here and there edgy.

Process:
The shrinking and growing sequences are just right. Not too fast and not too slow.
And I had my fun seeing Jade shrinking into her clothes.


The only critique is the ending.
In some stories it make sense to divide them in episodes, but this one I rather would have a finished plot, even if it would cost a little more.
Especially when the story just begins to get started.
What happened with Jade?

I hope there will be a comic soon who tells the rest and complete story of it!

Captain Ash

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