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Originally Posted by Susan Donym Stories
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As I'm trying to grow my own writing skills on transformations I've been purchasing other people's books and rereading a lot of the different stories and Attribute Theft, Breast Expansion and Breast Reduction are some of the areas I'm interested in writing in so this seemed like a good idea to pick up.
On the whole it's a nice story, I remember reading a very similar story with 3 people stealing someone's breasts once. I get the same vibe as that one. But I was able to finish this in one sitting, probably about 45 minutes or so.
My only complaint really has to do with the length and the price. For 3 dollars I kinda expect more than a short story, though I know 2.99 is the base price that Amazon offers for ebooks. I can't be mad because you clearly state 12,000 words. But you never really realize how long that is until you're done.
Still, like I said, it's a nice story. The imagery of how the reduction happens is actually very nice and I never thought of that imagery and that description before. Thank you for writing the story.
--Edit--
I also just left a review on Amazon for your book.
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