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Unread 04-16-2016   #3
qzar9999
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Re: A Small Part,

If you do plan to sell e-books, I would recommend that you find a good proofreader. Your concept isn't bad, but I found the story a little hard to read due to various spelling, grammar, and formatting issues. Don't get me wrong, it's a lot better than some things out there, but it's not up to a professional standard.
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