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Originally Posted by qzar9999
If you do plan to sell e-books, I would recommend that you find a good proofreader. Your concept isn't bad, but I found the story a little hard to read due to various spelling, grammar, and formatting issues. Don't get me wrong, it's a lot better than some things out there, but it's not up to a professional standard.
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I'm going to agree with qzar. I really like the premise of the story. I have no problem with this being an unproofed draft because, as qzar said, it's better than some things out there. What made it hard to read for me, however, wasn't the spelling or grammar but the long paragraphs.
Other than that, I enjoyed it for what it was--a first draft on this forum. It had more character depth (which I like) than many other stories I've read.