Very good. If you keep doin' them like this, you'll have an eager audience. I like the way the plot is simple, but works well. Although, you've got to hope his mum only does it the once. As funny as the thought is, it would get irksome after a while, spending all your time wondering when your mother grumbles you into the other gender.
Last edited by Ran; 12-28-2007 at 03:52 PM.
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