Hello! So, I have written a short story, put it up on DeviantArt, and was looking for some feedback on it. I'm not entirely sure if this is the right forum since there's a lot going on in it so I apologise if this is in the wrong place.
Features: Breast expansion, butt expansion, pussy inflation, futa, lactation, lesbians, sex, and possibly a few other things I've missed.
Check it out here:
https://www.deviantart.com/whosthisg...blem-753427338