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Originally Posted by whoknows
Evil Eye can you make this into some word document? Its better for reading purposes rather than listing it on here?
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Ha, yeah, no kidding.
The whole thing is
twenty-seven pages unedited.
I'm working on it right now; "chapter one" as such took
three hours to sort out.
The imagery is
fantastic, but the prose can use some work.
EDIT:
For the record, twenty chapters, plus Foreword and Epilogue.
33 pages after chapter divisions.
50+ pages once editing is done.
STATUS
Chapter 1: DONE - Words In: 1211; Words Out: 1194
Chapters 2 - 20: PENDING
Epilogue: DONE - Words In: 94; Words Out: 87
I think
character count is up on those words, though; I'm trying to go more for descriptive than wordy, while fixing the passive voice issues prevalent in the text.
I'd love to see things like the Estate in greater detail, but I realize that'd detract from the more adult goal of this text.