I kinda pointed this out a while ago:
http://www.process-productions.com/f...postcount=2438
A shame there was like zero reaction for it. On to feedback.
* Group pic: Ino's left boob is kinda smaller than the other.
* In the same pic, Sakura has practically no waist; it's like her ass starts right below her boobs.
* Same pic: Naruko's legs seem to form a very sharp angle around her crotch. It could be my bias towards pussy expansion talking, but I think there should be a bit more space around that area. I can't imaging that kind of squeeze would be too comfortable for most guys.
* In the pics with side views of the girls' asses, they could stand to be a little more... out there. Don't be afraid to go overboard on the bootyliciousness.