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Unread 04-10-2014   #51
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Re: Nozomu Nouzomi (slow process)

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Originally Posted by Cuchulin View Post
A few more chapters focusing on the sister transitioning and Nozomu finding it harder to hide his change would have been nice.
Agreed, but most important would be at least a few pages showing them a few years in the future as they approach adulthood, to see how they adjusted and turned out. For me, I feel much better when there is proper closure to a story that wraps things up. Without this, there are too many questions on how they turn out.
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