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Re: Spells ‘R Us: Visual Aid (AP, BE, Bimbo)

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Originally Posted by Dragon FangX View Post
Haven't been on in some many months for a check in. Nice to come on and find something like this. XD

I have to say, having read it, the art is good and the story is good too... up till end. I'm not a fan of the ending itself. I don't mind bad endings but I don't feel like its a deserved one. Not when the fate in question was a result of another. Just sort of left a bitter taste in my mouth at the end, especially given how good everything else about it is. Overall I don't regret spending the money, I just wish things had been a little different is all.
I honestly have to agree. The process work was well executed and the story was well done, but... the ending and epilogue left me a bit uneasy. It was worth the cost, but it just bugs me how bitter the end was when everything else was so sweet.
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