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Unread 04-02-2014   #8
oxdaman
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Re: First Comic: MikoXMonster!

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Originally Posted by daakuhakushaku View Post
I thought it was pretty great!

I appreciate when process is a pleasant surprise to the subject (or at least a pleasurable experience), and confident succubi who exploit their process for seduction are always good for some shenannigans. The light and fun tone of it is also a plus for me.

If I had to choose something to criticize, I'd say that though your art is solid and appealing in many ways, the perspective would probably benefit from practice, particularly in the head/face area. Sometimes I notice facial features kinda squeezing into an open area that isn't obscured by hair or angle, for instance. Your expressions still totally work because they have a lot of charm and character, but that's the only thing coming to mind.

Hope you keep at it! Looking forward to more.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

I definitely agree that the perspectives could use some work (among other things), but it's just something that'll come with experience I guess. Thanks for the critic!
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