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chocolatejr9 · 03-13-2022

Just got around to reading this (it was admittedly rather hard to do on my phone...). Not a bad start, though maybe this was due to my problems reading it, but it was a little hard to tell what direction the story was going in? Not that that's a bad thing, mind you, but I just wanted to offer some feedback.

03-13-2022	#8
chocolatejr9 Process Fan Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 46	Re: Tales of Lemuria Just got around to reading this (it was admittedly rather hard to do on my phone...). Not a bad start, though maybe this was due to my problems reading it, but it was a little hard to tell what direction the story was going in? Not that that's a bad thing, mind you, but I just wanted to offer some feedback.