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Very nicely done, Skiff. The only critiques I have at this point are the black bar in page six that's very visually "heavy" and doesn't seem to serve a purpose, and the fact that Dr. Ross goes from jacket to no jacket without any kind of in-between action or dialogue to let the reader know. It just kind of vanishes off her between panels.
Other than that, fantastic work. Great sequences, and I can't wait to see what comes next. You've got some real talent and skill behind your work and it just keeps getting better and better.
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