Re: New EBook: "Scale Model"
OK, that's twice I can recall in recent memory that you had platform shoes on a character. But did you describe the outfit before introducing them this time? There was no real way to visualize Liz's outfit in Interview, but at that point in the story, that wasn't the point.
Premise is interesting: an interactive shrinking process as an art exhibit. I will pick it up. I was not disappointed with Interview.
As an aside, I would really research female fashion trends. Most writers I see dress up their women like 90's grunge teenagers. If I see another pair of sneakers on a character, I will gag.
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