Re: Laundry Day - Shrink Fan Comics
You can't wholly remove the rape-ishness of the scenario without completely remaking the comic but I think a big help would be to tone down the back and forth of begging and pleading vs villainous rapist dialogue.
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Can't really draw well.
I can write when I find the time.
But mostly I'm here to leech! *thumbs up*
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