[Captain Ash]

The art is beyond gorgeous.
I like the way how the artist is playing with the various types of perspectives.
By switching the perspectives, it avoids that it becomes static, making anything what happens more dynamic.
The reader always has the right impression who is the big one, and who the small one.
The pose and face expressions of the characters are excellent and convey the feeling of how small and uncomfortable Dawn feels.

As about the complains to the rape scenes in this story.
Right, Nancie forces Dawn to sex.
But this situation never feels off or forces as Nadine shrunk Dawn on purpose with the intend to take advantage of her. It is obvious from the very beginning that Nadine is not a nice roommate.
But I guess shrinking someone who pays half the rent is never a good idea. :P
However, it is not like that Dawn subdue's to Nadine's importunity, but repelled her attemps, despite the size differece, which I find personally refreshing.
Just because is Dawn is small, doesn't has to make her a victim, which again gives her a unique character worthwhile to be remembered.

Summary
The story is fun to read with some very outstanding artwork to indulge.
Compared to the first comic you see the huge improvement.
The story seems to continue to another issue and hope to see it in a similar quality.