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Originally Posted by Lucy Fernandez
Ok, I started reading this story in hopes for some hot gendertransformation and expansion, but now it's just really all in all entertaining, hilarious and very interesting.
I noticed a few minor grammar mistakes and typos, but nothing too bad.
And the characters are so alive, oh my god! I love Chloe btw, she's so funny and sassy. And Devin is really sweet.
Also yes, I did get off to it, but now I'm reading it more for entertaining purposes^^
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Thanks! I'm glad you like the story as well as the sexy.
I recently had a generous individual step forward and volunteer to proofread for me, so hopefully we'll see less of those typos going forward.