[Tiedefender]

After reading this I think it's pretty good.

The good

1. The art looks well made. The art maintains it's quality throughout the comic.

2. It's a complete story and the scenes flow naturally together.

3. Nice shrinking sequences. Can actually see her change size.

The bad

1. The layout of the comic. Have to zoom in to read then constantly scroll up and down. With PDF not enough room between new pages to indicate new section.

2.The explanation of the shrinking device could have been more concise.

3.Mercedes hair looks inconsistent at times. The quality appears to dip lower in some scenes.