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Unread 12-02-2017   #6
Tiedefender
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Re: The Blind Cyclops - Shrink Fan Comics

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Originally Posted by Captain Ash View Post
I like the art.
It invites the reader to scroll forth and back the pages.
The character designs of these three shrunken girls are simply adorable.
The artist did a great job with the perspectives and face expressions.

I’ve enjoyed this comic, but while reading I had this feeling to miss a story beyond this story.
For example, why it is forbidden for humans to enter this club?
Are there any consequences for those who try?
Their mystical friend Lana was worried to bring these three girls in, but did not say why.

The idea of shrinking women down to fairies is very compelling, though I wished those girls would try to take their advantages out of it; like to make attempts to fly, even if they would fail miserably by trying.
Or their shock of being naked all of a sudden. There it would have been nice if Lana would have told them that fairies are always nude.
Such little details would have round up the story, if you enter a mystical world.

Besides all these great drawing and perspectives, there were a few I didn’t like so much.
The trampling scene was too long or this weird bathroom scene.

In summary it was a good read with the feeling that it could’ve exploit more the potential.
Nice detailed post. However, I ended up not liking this comic.

I too did like the artwork. The artist did do a good job with the comic. I disagree about the layout of the comic. It made it harder for me to follow the story.

The story is an interesting setup. The points you bring up are valid. As I thought everything seemed rushed. There was no character introductions.

My favorite shot was when they were in Lana's boobs.

Yeah I didn't like the bathroom scene. To me butt stuff to be disgusting.

In conclusion, this comic is not for me.
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