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Unread 03-29-2010   #135
Janus Steel
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Re: Attribute Theft/Transfer

Hey Folks,

I've been working on this story for the last three weeks. I'm half way finished. I'm at 22,000 words. Just 23,000 short of where I plan to finish this.

I wanted to share this, I've bounced this a few times off of Max to see what he thinks. I was hoping to get some more reactions.

I have a few questions I'd like to ask though.

1. Do the character personalities change via the attribute changes like I hope.
2. Is anyone put off about the fantasy/D&D aspect in modern times
3. Any suggestions before I get to Mirlinth's revenge/discovery?
4. Any general suggestions on how to make the story better?

Thanks in advance guys and I hope you enjoy this. Its been a blast so far to right this.
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