[godleydemon]

well I read it and it was pretty well written. The process part of it was decently done, could of been a bit more descriptive. But all and all pretty good. But it ended on kind of a sad note. Mel really didn't deserve anything that was coming her way, and the end left me hoping Mel might some how get her just revenge for what happened. Though the story was sexy, the ending just leaves me sad. But all and all a good story bud.