[bradbarry2]

I liked the story. I didnt think I would enjoy the dragon elements, but they worked well for me. I like the theft by transfer from past growth aspect and I am interested in seeing how Loth gets hers (and more I assume) back from Sevikira. These stories have encouraged me to post my incomplete/rough draft story. It has a transfer element that is not evident at first. It actually mixes atribute theft and body swapping with a DC comic universe theme. Like you with the D&D elements, I write about what I like. To me, there just are not enough art or stories with all these various tfs.