Wow, I didn't know how long this thread went on after I posted it. At any rate, I bugged a decent hypnosis studio to try out this "animal hypnosis with process" idea and they eventually did it! What they did was a little different than what I had asked for, but it definitely was in response to my request. I messaged them again, saying that it would be nice for him to pause the transformation in places and have the women describe what they see (feathers, etc..). Anyway, if you like this, you can also tell the studio you'd like more by clicking the feedback tab on the side of the page.
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