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Unread 05-14-2018   #3
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Re: Attempt at writing #2

Mmm I like the end size and you're improving. I know it must be hard not to hurry through these things for some people. But I would have liked to see it go slower and have some more anticipation, but maybe that's just me. I guess it's obvious I like to build up to things slowly and keep going and going. But I need some help too here and there. I'm trying to get one of my witch friends to help me with the first episode of my "Wand Envy" story. It will be with about 5 people, 4 chicks and my brother. I mean based on. I have a whole bunch of episodes in my mind. ha.

Anyways, Qzar is one of the best writers here, although there are some other really good ones around. But maybe he could respond.




BTW - I guess a lot of people shrank from this drink?
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