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Unread 08-06-2006   #3
GearRyu
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I like the coloring for Cloud's clothing, which you gave some detail to in the upper-half. The added moogle is a nice touch.

The breasts seem a little... odd-shaped. Perhaps the left one just seems a tad bit too small. And Cloud has too much of a baby-doll face in this picture, in my opinion. I recommend leaning toward a more adrogynous face.

And, oh, what if she had a skirt, instead of pants? That would look excellent on that picture, in my opinion.
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