http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...8/568427.html?
This is my first time doing any serious writing so I'd really appreciate any feedback or criticism.
I'm happy for anyone else who want to contribute to join it all I'd say is I'm writing a straight sex scene between her and Rick tomorrow so I'd appreciate if you leave that thread free. Otherwise, anyone who wants to get on some aroused newly plump ladies, go nuts!
(And apologies for the lack of formatting in this episode, I'd properly formatted it in MS Word, just didn't seem to carry over here, I'll see what I can do for the next episode.)