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Originally Posted by aresx
after listening to the whole thing i have to say that i really hope that if they do an actual TF video, they do a lot better than this. :/ there really wasn't even that much description...
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I know right. She didn't describe any of the following:
getting hot or sweaty
tearing off clothes
removing clothes
having clothes on or not at all
ears changing
feet changing
tail growing
getting on all fours
extra nipples or breasts
none of the above. It was very dull and boring. I also didn't enjoy the constant usage of "like" all the "it was like" "like you know". So not only was the description lacking but it was awfully written and poorly performed. Talking about how the dream could have been real when she never mentioned how she got outside to begin with, or waking up naked or anything. Using the word 'snout' instead of 'muzzle' also pretty much confirms whoever wrote that has never read a story produced by the community. It was just simply pathetic. I've heard better stuff done with text to speech programs.