[jack36262001]

Love it, the growth is always more of a turn on for me then the end result, and it’s very hard to find stories where it is the focus.

Not to mention well written ones at that too, the character description flows nicely with the scene rather then being just exposition. The third person perspective is maintained even in describing her what she is feeling without having to slip into first person.

I’d say I’d rate this as one of my new top five. A bit of polish on word choice and overall flow and I’d even give it #1, but that would be simply on its technical merit. Plot wise it’s a gem.