Expansion Art Critiques

Overgrowingassets · 12-26-2014

"Bigger is always better" that's the kind of stuff we think on this site. But it takes a bit of talent to be able to draw some massive proportions after a certain point. I want this thread to be opened to use Expansion artists who want to improve our style.

This is a cover for a Mass Effect Expansion series I have in mind. I have another one that is Samara vs Morinth.

This one was just an ASS EXPANSION practice with DC's Cheetah. AE is a bit trickier so I would really appreciate some feedback.

Matador · 12-26-2014

I like your work. Well done. And I hope this becomes a thread that other artists can jump into for feedback.

Overgrowingassets · 12-26-2014

Thanks man, I really want to improve my art. I love drawing women with massive tits and/or Ass, but I want to make sure I draw them well. I'm also alway looking for suggestions as to what to draw for my next piece. Something with Ass Expansion.

Overgrowingassets · 12-26-2014

Another AE attempt. Samus's ass sudden begins to balloon outward. As she goes for help, her tits start growing as well. As she tries to leave, her ever growing ass get's stuck in the door way.

Chaos Echo · 12-26-2014

You're off to a very good start so far.

Overgrowingassets · 12-27-2014

Thanks man, but I am kind of hoping for some feed back. What am I doing right and what do I need to fix.

Chaos Echo · 12-27-2014

Oh. Sorry then, I'm less good at picking apart things like that unless there's obvious flaws.

Blake Isaac Gordon · 12-27-2014

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Originally Posted by Overgrowingassets

Thanks man, but I am kind of hoping for some feed back. What am I doing right and what do I need to fix.

Crap, it took me a moment to figure out what was happening. She's stuck in a door correct?

Overgrowingassets · 12-27-2014

Yup. One flaw I've already seen is that her ass is too high up; meaning that she's already filled up the room behind her. But for that to happen she would of had to of been in a janitors closet or something.

What I'm mainly looking for is how to portray the rest of her lower region, since Ass Expansions effect the hips, thighs, waists, ect. ect., it makes it a bit more difficult.

12-26-2014	#1
Overgrowingassets Sir Purple Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 81	Expansion Art Critiques "Bigger is always better" that's the kind of stuff we think on this site. But it takes a bit of talent to be able to draw some massive proportions after a certain point. I want this thread to be opened to use Expansion artists who want to improve our style. This is a cover for a Mass Effect Expansion series I have in mind. I have another one that is Samara vs Morinth. This one was just an ASS EXPANSION practice with DC's Cheetah. AE is a bit trickier so I would really appreciate some feedback. __________________ Have a girl or two you'd like to see with some massive mammaries, but don't have the cash to get them commissioned? The check out our patreon! https://www.patreon.com/OvergrowingAssets

12-26-2014	#2
Matador Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Bum Fuck Egypt Posts: 180	Re: Expansion Art Critiques I like your work. Well done. And I hope this becomes a thread that other artists can jump into for feedback.

12-26-2014	#3
Overgrowingassets Sir Purple Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 81	Re: Expansion Art Critiques Thanks man, I really want to improve my art. I love drawing women with massive tits and/or Ass, but I want to make sure I draw them well. I'm also alway looking for suggestions as to what to draw for my next piece. Something with Ass Expansion. __________________ Have a girl or two you'd like to see with some massive mammaries, but don't have the cash to get them commissioned? The check out our patreon! https://www.patreon.com/OvergrowingAssets

12-26-2014	#4
Overgrowingassets Sir Purple Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 81	Re: Expansion Art Critiques Another AE attempt. Samus's ass sudden begins to balloon outward. As she goes for help, her tits start growing as well. As she tries to leave, her ever growing ass get's stuck in the door way. __________________ Have a girl or two you'd like to see with some massive mammaries, but don't have the cash to get them commissioned? The check out our patreon! https://www.patreon.com/OvergrowingAssets

12-26-2014	#5
Chaos Echo Process Disciple Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,276	Re: Expansion Art Critiques You're off to a very good start so far. __________________ http://chaosecho.deviantart.com/ Me on DeviantART. I upload my stuff over there. Pretty much dead though.

12-27-2014	#6
Overgrowingassets Sir Purple Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 81	Re: Expansion Art Critiques Thanks man, but I am kind of hoping for some feed back. What am I doing right and what do I need to fix. __________________ Have a girl or two you'd like to see with some massive mammaries, but don't have the cash to get them commissioned? The check out our patreon! https://www.patreon.com/OvergrowingAssets

12-27-2014	#7
Chaos Echo Process Disciple Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,276	Re: Expansion Art Critiques Oh. Sorry then, I'm less good at picking apart things like that unless there's obvious flaws. __________________ http://chaosecho.deviantart.com/ Me on DeviantART. I upload my stuff over there. Pretty much dead though.

12-27-2014	#9
Overgrowingassets Sir Purple Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 81	Re: Expansion Art Critiques Yup. One flaw I've already seen is that her ass is too high up; meaning that she's already filled up the room behind her. But for that to happen she would of had to of been in a janitors closet or something. What I'm mainly looking for is how to portray the rest of her lower region, since Ass Expansions effect the hips, thighs, waists, ect. ect., it makes it a bit more difficult. __________________ Have a girl or two you'd like to see with some massive mammaries, but don't have the cash to get them commissioned? The check out our patreon! https://www.patreon.com/OvergrowingAssets