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Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2005
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This is a pretty good attempt. I'd say ease upon the amount of strokes you use, (My old art prof called it "pencilbation") but you've got a solid start. Practice, maybe a shading/anatomy book, and I forsee good things for you here.
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03-30-2007
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Gentelman, quite Large
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Where the wind is at my back
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humm not bad. not great. but not bad
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03-30-2007
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DERP
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: right over there!!!
Posts: 296
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I think its a pretty nice one
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03-30-2007
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Prophet Of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 1,792
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Yeah, it's pretty good but naturally - practice makes perfect
 Also, as I always say - you might want to consider a story to go with the pictures, it can add a lot. |
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03-30-2007
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Thank you for all the advice everybody. I'll be working on a new one to see if I can make any improvements. I already have a story in my head with my other character Heather Rose.
Also my DA is http://zanbon-sengetsu.deviantart.com/ but I don't have any BE material on there yet. |
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04-04-2007
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Boobs fan
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 67
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Nice drawings...
Can I suggest you to work more on shadows and add a background in your next artwork? |
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