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Skiff · 09-25-2005

Hello all, long time listener first time caller here. I?ve been working on a little project here for the past 3 days and thought this would be the best place to get some feedback on it. Also, since I don?t have a website? it?s a ?Process? exclusive.
So here it is? like it or hate it, my art. I scaled them down in size and color for this post. They?re still just sketch work and I?ll go over them again later to finish them and add color. First I?m going to finish all the pages naturally.

On with the show?

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Fake_Name · 09-25-2005

I like it. Do continue.

the one thing I would recomend is some sort of markings or speech bubbles to mark who is saying what, or doing the text on a computer.

Kyu · 09-25-2005

I agree w/Fake_Name. I like your art style, and I'm interested to see where the comic goes next. But it's very hard to read scanned pencil text, especially when it's kind of small and rather light (I mostly skipped the two long text panels). I would definitely consider just writing out your script and then using a computer program for the text.

Other than that, two thumbs way, way up, Gene. (And Fake_Name, I think your avatar is planning some devious scheme... those closed eyes are just a facade!)

Istmael · 09-25-2005

They look awesome!!! Can't wait to see the finished work!

Sutibaru · 09-25-2005

If you have Adobe Photoshop, you can click "shift+ctrl+L" and it fixed all of the darks and lights.

But it looks good man. A lot of reading, but that is usually good.

animewolf · 09-25-2005

good stuff

foxmaster5 · 09-25-2005

Sweet, keep it coming

AnimeGuy2005 · 09-25-2005

Great job keep it up.

ProfessorMishap · 09-25-2005

Holy!! Man that's really something... Continue please, please!!

09-25-2005

Not bad work, really!

I think you only need to apply on backgrounds to get a better effect, but bodies are good, faces too...

I also suggest, if you like to have an "own place" beyond this board, to create a Yahoo group to show your artworks...

This is simply an idea: new painters born from simply things...

SoylentOrange · 09-25-2005

Not too shabby. Flow needs a little work, and some speech bubbles would help a lot, but you've got an interesting premise.

milkfish987 · 09-25-2005

Very good. Thanx for sharing!

09-25-2005	#1
Skiff Sometimes Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 148	Image - Skiff Art Hello all, long time listener first time caller here. I?ve been working on a little project here for the past 3 days and thought this would be the best place to get some feedback on it. Also, since I don?t have a website? it?s a ?Process? exclusive. So here it is? like it or hate it, my art. I scaled them down in size and color for this post. They?re still just sketch work and I?ll go over them again later to finish them and add color. First I?m going to finish all the pages naturally. On with the show? (Attachments moved to new thread) Last edited by Skiff; 11-18-2005 at 02:37 AM.

09-25-2005	#5
Sutibaru --- Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 5,865	If you have Adobe Photoshop, you can click "shift+ctrl+L" and it fixed all of the darks and lights. But it looks good man. A lot of reading, but that is usually good. __________________ Deviantart\|FurAffinity\|Tumblr\|Picarto

09-25-2005	#7
foxmaster5 Fx Artist Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 361	Sweet, keep it coming __________________ Just Add Water DA: http://just-add-water99.deviantart.com/ BE and Giantess Comics and Pin ups updated bi-weekly!

09-25-2005	#2
Fake_Name Archives everything Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Fake_Place Posts: 680	I like it. Do continue. the one thing I would recomend is some sort of markings or speech bubbles to mark who is saying what, or doing the text on a computer.

09-25-2005	#3
Kyu Guinness... Brilliant! Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 141	I agree w/Fake_Name. I like your art style, and I'm interested to see where the comic goes next. But it's very hard to read scanned pencil text, especially when it's kind of small and rather light (I mostly skipped the two long text panels). I would definitely consider just writing out your script and then using a computer program for the text. Other than that, two thumbs way, way up, Gene. (And Fake_Name, I think your avatar is planning some devious scheme... those closed eyes are just a facade!)

09-25-2005	#4
Istmael Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 159	They look awesome!!! Can't wait to see the finished work!

09-25-2005	#6
animewolf Process Fan Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 91	good stuff

09-25-2005	#8
AnimeGuy2005 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 247	Great job keep it up.

09-25-2005	#9
ProfessorMishap Oh dear, not again! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: I'm standing right behind you!! Posts: 2,158	Holy!! Man that's really something... Continue please, please!!

09-25-2005	#10
Gas75 Guest Posts: n/a	Not bad work, really! I think you only need to apply on backgrounds to get a better effect, but bodies are good, faces too... I also suggest, if you like to have an "own place" beyond this board, to create a Yahoo group to show your artworks... This is simply an idea: new painters born from simply things...

09-25-2005	#11
SoylentOrange Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,920	Not too shabby. Flow needs a little work, and some speech bubbles would help a lot, but you've got an interesting premise.

09-25-2005	#12
milkfish987 Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 61	Very good. Thanx for sharing!