Anna's Dragon Hatching (story)

[norz]

I wrote a fic, dragoness TF. Purely pornographic. Skin ripping / hatching transformation.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8769097/

The file is on Furaffinity. Please enjoy. If you like it, do tell! :3

[TF-Viewer]

I liked it. Though the tail coming out of her anus and the lines about her shitting out a tail were a little off putting, but the rest was nice.

[norz]

Thanks for the feedback. :x Fortunately, the story isn't scatalogical, just graphic. But I can watch the language in the future, for a more general audience. Depends on the story, I suppose.

I've watched the TF community for a long time without contributing. TF content often contains a mosaic of fetishes, and it can be difficult to finish a story or comic sequence while staying entirely on common ground.

I'd happily take suggestions on more vanilla sexual content for the future, if people want to read it.

[TF-Viewer]

Don't get me wrong, I thought it was a neat way to do the tail growth, and I'm really glad there was no scat involved. I was worried there would be for a moment with the wording used there. Skin ripping TFs are a rare type and I'm happy to see the method used. If you want to do more of those I'd be happy to read them. The sexual element isn't even key in my opinion, but sometimes welcome.

[DragonMasterX]

I don't really mean to nit-pick or anything, but tails grow out of tailbones, which are above the rump, not inside, in-between, or even remotely connected to the anus. Even reptiles follow this principle close. Just imagine how complicated it would be if their tail would come out of their bums. x:

[Daichi Azure]

AGreed...but a good read none the less. So if your tail came out of your anus...that's a pretty shitty tail...

[norz]

Originally Posted by DragonMasterX

I don't really mean to nit-pick or anything, but tails grow out of tailbones, which are above the rump, not inside, in-between, or even remotely connected to the anus. Even reptiles follow this principle close. Just imagine how complicated it would be if their tail would come out of their bums. x:

This is a valid criticism, especially since anatomical inaccuracy is a sin in both erotic and TF fiction, but I went into the scene with a very particular fetishistic image to produce, so I ignored reality and then acknowledged after the scene that I must've ignored it. I put in a line to clue the reader that I went with fantasy over anything realistic in that sense, indicating that her tail had in fact grown from the correct location after all.

Consider it the same kind of anatomical nonsense that allows extra arms to grow out of someone's sides where there's only ribs.

[Daichi Azure]

Originally Posted by norz

Consider it the same kind of anatomical nonsense that allows extra arms to grow out of someone's sides where there's only ribs.

Valid counter arguement...

[jolem]

Originally Posted by norz

I put in a line to clue the reader that I went with fantasy over anything realistic in that sense, indicating that her tail had in fact grown from the correct location after all.

I'm actually surprised no one saw that clue and just assummed that's what it felt like to her. Unless of course, that wasn't there when anyone first read it.

[vincent_richter]

Originally Posted by jolem

I'm actually surprised no one saw that clue and just assummed that's what it felt like to her. Unless of course, that wasn't there when anyone first read it.

...and just like that, "the comics write themselves" has become a somewhat terrifying prospect...