I need to turn an SW RP into a SW story! But -

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it starts almost in the middle of hotness. Or the beginning of hotness! It's a scorching RP I did with Nina! MMM

Here's the start of it! ((Slightly edited already. Oh and she gave me approval to write it up! Also English is not her first language. She's German.))

My YM Status was "on a shrink break!"

nina: heya
Ozara: Hiya Nina! ** glomp **
nina: whats a shrink break?
nina: *hugs*
Ozara: shrinking on your break from chores or work I guess! haha
Ozara: I actually have to get back to some housework
nina: oh.. you could also understand it as a break from shrinking..
nina: too bad
Ozara: ikr
nina: ikr??
Ozara: i know, right?
Ozara: in other words - yeah
nina: i better dont give you some shrink potion then
nina: *shows you the vial*
Ozara: mmm ** bites lip **
Ozara: rain check...
Ozara: mmm damn
nina: the label says "extra potent... can cause disappearence"
Ozara: mmmm - oh gawd - I wish I could down that whole bottle right now
nina: *gets closer and sticks the vial into your cleavage, right between your boobs*
nina: teehee
nina: ^^
Ozara: ohh it's chilly - what a temptation that will be
nina: *squeezes your breasts*
Ozara: MMMM Heyyy!
nina: oh sorry
nina: *biting my lower lip
nina: as like tempting as the bottle *pointing at your chest*
Ozara: mmm oh you ** leans to give your a nice wet kiss **
...

I've done some creative writing in high school, and I've done pretty well with Cait, who is an excellent writer. But, um, any suggestions on a beginning leading up this? I'm not sure what to do with the beginning. :/ Settings. Description of where we are. How she got the potion. Etc. I've shared it with two or three peeps, but I think this will be very hott as a story.

[OhZone]

OHMY GAWD! This is gonna be hott, even if I do say so myself.


~~~~SAMPLE ~~~~

Suddenly, Nina leaned in and lightly bit the cork of the potion vial lodged in Zara's cleavage with her teeth. "Hey! Be careful! " Zara warned, finding herself getting more
and more excited by the danger, as Nina gazed up into her eyes. Nina's grin grew as she pulled the cork off with her teeth and let it drop the floor. Zara's eyes grew wide as saucers, as she trembled with fear and anticipation.

"Yes," Nina said, "now you really better be careful or... you may go subhuman!" Then she poked Zara in the ribs. "I'm such a bad, naughty woman."

Zara bit her lip, trying not to giggle or shake. "Hey, uh, maybe you should fetch that cork - and - " Nina cut off her train off thought, rubbing a finger against Zara's left nipple and then leaning in to lick Zara's chest. "Imagine, Zara, you getting smaller
and smaller! My tongue would become so huge!"

Zara closed her eyes, trying not to move, but feeling a growing warmth and moisture between her legs.

Nina continued, "all you have to do is let a couple of drops slip onto your skin. Hey, aren't you tired of standing? Don't you want to lie down?"

"But - but - it would spill all over my boobs!" Zara responded.

"Uhuh, " Nina agreed, as she roughly pushed Zara to the opposite wall hard, causing Zara's pictures to shake and almost fall to the floor. Then she grabbed Zara's hands and held them above her head. "Wha- what are you doing to me," Zara asked meekly.

Nina just replied, "Zara, baby, you're absolutely in my control."

She tilted her head and pressed her lips to the dark haired girl's, and gave her a long wet kiss, as she rubbed her body against her captive. Then she lifted her leg and rubbed it against Zara's thiegh, moving upwards. When she opened her eyes, she observed a couple of drops on the flask's neck, running down the side, and a small dark spot on Zara's top.

Zara just moaned, "Oh, Nina! You're so sexy - you're giving me tingles!"


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I can't wait to finish this! OHYEAH!