Derelict Jedi (Star Wars TF)

[Obsidian Reaver]

Hello all!

Awhile back, I pitched the idea of doing a TF with Jaina Solo of the Star Wars Expanded Universe. Unfortunately, no one seemed to take up the idea...so I did it myself!

I can't draw, but I CAN write. So, here it is! My take on a Jaina Solo TF.

Enjoy! And let me know what you think.

PS: I added a custom intro sequence for this story...

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...yes, I am a nerd with a little extra time on his hands.

Hope it helps to set the story up!

NOTE: This contains some spoilers from the new Fate of the Jedi series. If you haven't read those novels yet, but want to, here's fair warning that this could ruin parts of them for you.

[Lonebeatle]

TF into what?

[hexen]

Originally Posted by Lonebeatle

TF into what?

Krayt Dragon? Which is amazing by the way.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by Lonebeatle

TF into what?

As hexen pointed out, Krayt Dragon.

I'll edit the title.

@hexen

Thank you! This one actually took a fair amount of time to write (busy with work + a need for the story to feel authentic). Glad you liked it.

[TF-Viewer]

Pretty good, I really liked the tail growth.

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by TF-Viewer

Pretty good, I really liked the tail growth.

Thank you. I really like tail growths myself. Don't seem to be to many detailed descriptions, or it's just kind of glossed over in some stories.

Thinking about writing the sequel to this soon, depending on the feedback I get.

[frice2000]

Kind of wish she had turned the tables and this wasn't such a dark end. Losing sentience in a story isn't really my cup of tea. Still was well written.

[hexen]

Originally Posted by Obsidian Reaver

Thank you. I really like tail growths myself. Don't seem to be to many detailed descriptions, or it's just kind of glossed over in some stories.

Thinking about writing the sequel to this soon, depending on the feedback I get.

To tell the truth, I've been waiting for new instalments on the Merger series, that stuff reminds me a lot of my Dungeons and Dragons days. But I'm feeding you positively for this one too so please keep up with whatever you want!!

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by frice2000

Kind of wish she had turned the tables and this wasn't such a dark end. Losing sentience in a story isn't really my cup of tea. Still was well written.

Thanks. Fret not over Jaina's fate, though. The sequel will go further into her situation, and what the Jedi plan to do to save her.

@hexen,

More Merger, huh? I think that can be arranged (I honestly didn't think it was that popular, but I'm happy to oblige).

[Eynimeb]

That was really nice! I love it when a woman turns into something big and powerful. The writing, especially the description of the process was excellent.

I couldn't help myself and looked up Krayt dragons on the wookiepedia, 20 metres is actually pretty small for a Krayt dragon. Do you intend to make her grow further (possibly turn her into a greater Krayt) ? Would be awesome if you did. ^^

Either way, looking forward to part 2!

[Obsidian Reaver]

Originally Posted by Eynimeb

That was really nice! I love it when a woman turns into something big and powerful. The writing, especially the description of the process was excellent.

I couldn't help myself and looked up Krayt dragons on the wookiepedia, 20 metres is actually pretty small for a Krayt dragon. Do you intend to make her grow further (possibly turn her into a greater Krayt) ? Would be awesome if you did. ^^

Either way, looking forward to part 2!

I actually chose 20 meters based on Jaina's age. Jaina is still relatively young (I dunno, late 20's-early 30' would be my on-the-fly guess). Thus, she mutated into a younger version of a krayt dragon (and thus not as large). She's still big at 20 meters (60ish feet in length), mind you.

Really glad you enjoyed the story and process, and thank you for the feedback! That's really a big part of the reward for me, people's thoughts (positive or negative), and motivates me to write more. Did you have a favorite part? Maybe something you'd like to see more of?

EDIT: Off-topic, just realized I made a silly mistake in the video; should be "Galactic Alliance"... not "Grand Alliance". Oops.

[Eynimeb]

Well, my favorite part was when Yin was asking Garr to stop. I was half expecting her to grow too big and powerful, and turn the tables on them. ^^ That certainly is something I'd like to see, but I'm fairly predictable that way - there is no such thing as too much growth, for me.