A quick B.E. Comic

Just a little something I did at 12:00AM earlier and I thought it was okay. It took no longer then 5 minutes to draw then maybe 20 minute for the rest so it's not suppose to look pretty. Mainly I made this to re-introduce my cartoon character I made, Beaver Boy XD.

Also I guess the MegaMushroom idea is a bit stolen from Sutibaru but I don't think he'll mind.

Here is a link for those who hate how .PNG files work on this forums.

http://zanbon-sengetsu.deviantart.co...eturn-63467014

::Please note that Beaver Boy is just a cartoon and he can only say Chuk or Chuka. If you don't like it, get over it::

[Kevin_Generic]

Mega mushroom is in the New Super Mario Bros for the DS.

Originally Posted by Kevin_Generic

Mega mushroom is in the New Super Mario Bros for the DS.

OMG, you sir have just made my day XD. I meant using the MegaMushshroom to increase the size of breasts 10x. I'm not being mean but that was funny.

hehe nice; keep working and improving

Thanks, I have a few people on DA who are helping me a lot.

*cries in the inside due to lack of comments and/or feedback*

Wow, I know I'm new but I'm THAT bad?

[MadmanDarkHeretic]

Pngs get less responses generally because the forum handles them wrong. Also, it's less a question of that bad so much as '95 percent of the attention goes to 5 percent of the artists'or whatnot. Anyhow, good try though =p For feedback? Well, it suffers as a be from most/all of the relevant be (and bust shots in general) being off camera for the short work. While its harder to draw, the overall delivery works better with the change being more visible.

Alright, I thought the Link would be useful since any other file type ruins the image. Thanks for the feedback, that helped a bit about how much of the character to show. If this was a multiple page comic I would have shown the changes but thanks for the feedback.

[PrBlahBlahtson]

Quick, spontanious, with no real previous connection to the characters... Let me be clear, I am not saying that it's bad, but it doesn't exactly grab and hold the attention, or make any sense by itself. I suppose it might make more sense when put in context of the "again", but I didn't find it by quickly browsing your deviantArt gallery. I did see the sequence you'd done, and that didn't seem to be all that bad either.

I didn't really want to reply in the thread because it didn't seem to be anything that would be all that... desirable, as feedback. I always feel bad if I have something not-positive to say about an artist's work, and usually the good stuff's already said.

Y'got the right idea, but you didn't hit a home run with it, that's all. Doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll do fine.

Originally Posted by PrBlahBlahtson

I didn't really want to reply in the thread because it didn't seem to be anything that would be all that... desirable, as feedback. I always feel bad if I have something not-positive to say about an artist's work, and usually the good stuff's already said.

Y'got the right idea, but you didn't hit a home run with it, that's all. Doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll do fine.

Due to my lack of smarts in my own language. I guess "again" was a wrong word. I guess I should explain. Roxy's one of my main characters. Beaver Boy is a cartoon character I made out of boredom last year. In my comment under the art I said the 1st attempt Beaver Boy made hit Moxy, Roxy's little sister. I can't really post that drawing due to DA intolerance to young characters in that kind of scene. Just the fact that you didn't hate makes me happy.