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Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
Despite my attempts to resist posting this prematurely before it was finished. I could not help myself. This is really only half of the first chapter and it took me almost two weeks to complete, so I think I will hopefully be able to post a half of a chapter at a time every two to three weeks throughout the summer.
The first chapter is mainly AR/AP and this half has just two ARed characters, the second half will have alot more and I plan to announce what TF will occur in future chapters before I post them. Also I'm not certain as to how to post future chapters that are not AR/AP whether on this thread or the others based on the TF occuring. Anyways here are the first Nine pages and the cover that may fortell future events Enjoy XD
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
That's awesome.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
Lmao.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
Very well done sir, thanks a lot! It's about time we got some more young Age Regression process on this forum again! Let me just say your work is looking even more masterful then your last manga that I wildly enjoyed! Bravo!
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
The new artwork done (assumably) by you is nowhere near the original Akamatsu, but I do, however, like where this is going. A-.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
The art is done by me of course, I use Macromedia Flash to draw over existing manga images and then alter them to look however I want them to look, hense my unique style of art. For example, the frame where Seta is enjoying a little payback with Haruka, the original was a frame in Volume 4 of Love Hina that had Keitaro and Sara originally in the same pose. As we all know, manga is hand drawn and my art is done in the computer, so if I had talent like Akamatsu I would have done it by hand and it would look more like his, but then again it is never my intention to create exact copies of other people's work, then where would be the sense of originality.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
You`re the shrinkmaster after all. Its simply incredible and its only the beginning.
Process appeal level is 3,000 for now. Yes I have my own process appeal rating system Its great to see some time with Seta and Haruka, the manga really didnt get to that much. I really felt some of Akamatsu`s comedy in this. On the 6th page where Haruka tells Seta what happened and then gets angry, Akamatsu would use 2 expressions on the same face to display that kind of scene. You`ve called back the laughter of Love hina,sniff. Thank you. Cant wait for the next chapter. Just out of curiosity, are you going to be able to put so many processes in one story? It`ll be hard to balance the story otherwise. Or are you going to do separate chapters with each of them having a different process and story. Do you remember in volume 11 of love hina where Kanako disguised as Naru forced some adult Lingerie on Shinobu and commented on how Shinobu`s breasts left alot of room in the bra and then Shinobu ran way crying. How about a scene where there is room and with the magic of BE the breasts fill the bra. Thank you again for another masterpiece, SHRINKMASTER Last edited by chachazero90; 06-13-2008 at 07:38 AM. |
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
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oh and I almost forgot, I was thinking how interesting it would be for the two characters to find a brief love interest in the opposite worlds, should it just simply be older Negi with Naru and young Keitaro with Asuna, or should it be with the other supporting characters. let me know what pairings you guys think would be good.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
Older Negi with Naru is good. Shinobi maybe better because they are both similar ages(mentally)
Younger Keitaro is hard. Asuna likes older men, I`d say Nodoka would be best. Nodoka is only a little taller than Negi and everyone loves the shy girl. Shrinkmaster, How far have you read with Negima? |
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
I think aging Shinobu and Sarah to Naru's age would be cool.
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Re: Colliding Worlds - The First Nine Pages
This is good...
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