My Writing

dawestside · 10-14-2008

Hope you don't mind me just posting this here...
I have a few stories on Writing.com. Atually most of them were written while bored etc. I know they won't be perfect but I'm not the best writer ever and I think when you create your own, you get what you want.
So, I have a little series going on called Megan and Libby. There's a few more and there by dawestside. (me :3)
Anyway, I'll go back to my box and hide. ENJOY!

Mattariel · 10-15-2008

You'll never get readers like that. A link, if you please.

Prophet Tenebrae · 10-15-2008

Quite - there's nothing more off putting than asking for someone's patronage and then making them go jump through some hoops.

I'd suggest you do as Mattariel suggests and maybe toss in a description of your story.

humble.fool · 10-15-2008

http://www.writing.com/main/view_ite..._id/dawestside

There we go.

Mr GorpThorp · 10-15-2008

A good start for an author- my advice would be to refrain from using the more juvenile breast terminologies during narration (like boobies) unless the character is speaking the word. Also feel free to make them longer, you have some good stories that you could stretch the plot out some on. Time allowing, of course. I'm interested to read more...

humble.fool · 10-15-2008

I wrote a little something based on "Tash and a family curse". I hope you don't mind.

dawestside · 10-16-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by humble.fool

I wrote a little something based on "Tash and a family curse". I hope you don't mind.

I seriously don't mind. Be my guest!
And also I'm sorry bout no link. I totaly forgot!
Thanks for the critism.

dawestside · 10-16-2008

I might post a full rant in the correct section tomorrow.
Writing.com has now stated my limititation of entries is full.

So I'm going to copy a guys idea from the Tf section of the forum and post all new stories in this thread. So please, as soon as this begins to grate on anybodies nerves please tell me. I usually post a story a day. Don't you just love entusiasm.
Also by doing this, I hope to create free readable content for people too low on DA MONEYZZZZ to afford the BEArchive.
Thanks alot, dawestside.

dawestside · 10-17-2008

Let me introduce you to my running series across many websites. Megan and Libby! Yeah... How anticlinatic that was.... Her ya go! Appreciation, hate and critism welcomed like a horny 19 year old blond.

Libby was looking on the Internet for something to amuse her. She'd been at it for an hour and eventually gave up and went to get something to eat. "Megan!! Did we get those biscuits?!" Libby yelled from the kitchen, Megan screamed back, "Yeah, there in the cupboard! Next to Jeff's lady magazines!" Libby opened the cupboard and found her prize. She was distgusted by Megan for letting Jeff bring the pornography into the house. Shurruging off the anger and placing her Shapley derrihair on the couch, she tucked in. "Woah, these biscuits are amazing!" Muffled Libby through her full mouth, swolloing she ran up stairs to Megan's room. "Knock knock, you got to try these---" Libby was shellshocked. Megan was there, sitting and rubbing massive breasts. "MEGAN, WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED?!?!" Libby was so furious that her friend would have done this to herself. "Mmhmm, Libby... Huhuhu... Biscuits.... Boobs..." Libby soon discorvered what Megan meant. She felt her top tightening. Her bra was shoveling into the skin. "Oh my god... This can't be happening..." puffed Libby. She was lurched forward by the immense weight of the flesh. They had grown from already large Cs to immence Es in a matter of two minutes. "Oh... OHOHOHOH!" Libby felt her skirt snap as her arse wobbled outwards. Her shirt was in tatters as her skin on the back wriggler and squiggled around on underneath the straining and stained bra. Her arms fattened up along with her legs. The back burst the bra as it rose and the stomach inflated. "Libby... How much... Oh Shit!" Megan saw her breast increase more as milk dripped from her nipples. Meanwhile, Libby was moaning as her stomach increased further and her entire body was a bulbous blob. The breasts continued there growth and stopped at the size of a skip, shoving everything to the side and smashing the glass on the window. "MY LEGS! LOOK!" The legs were growing and were still gaing wieght, her stomach stopped andnher nipples stood the size of a man. "Oh FUCK!" Libby couldn't stop her swearing as she felt the milk squirt out like a fountain, and then gushed out like a hose. It sprayed everywhere until they both passed out.
Morning came as did Megan the previous evening, and Libby found the ability to walk. Both girls were size V breasts by the official health society, as found on Google later, but Libby was rushed to labour as she gave birth to 12 children and was featured on the news. She was standing with the news reporter and her height had increased by several foot, her arse had become firm and hard and the stomach had vanished.
"This was Charlie Charlseon, reporting live from The Hospital." Off camera, Charlie left a pack of chocolates for the secutary. "Ohhhhhh..." came down the corridor.

10-14-2008	#1
dawestside Leecher Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 9	My Writing Hope you don't mind me just posting this here... I have a few stories on Writing.com. Atually most of them were written while bored etc. I know they won't be perfect but I'm not the best writer ever and I think when you create your own, you get what you want. So, I have a little series going on called Megan and Libby. There's a few more and there by dawestside. (me :3) Anyway, I'll go back to my box and hide. ENJOY! __________________ There should be a Rick Roll where the womans boobs grow.

10-15-2008	#2
Mattariel Supreme lurker Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 324	Re: My Writing You'll never get readers like that. A link, if you please. __________________

10-15-2008	#3
Prophet Tenebrae Prophet Of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: UK Posts: 1,792	Re: My Writing Quite - there's nothing more off putting than asking for someone's patronage and then making them go jump through some hoops. I'd suggest you do as Mattariel suggests and maybe toss in a description of your story. __________________ Female Transformation Chat! Female Transformation Uber Blog BE Story Club

10-15-2008	#4
humble.fool Rubber Band Man Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 320	Re: My Writing http://www.writing.com/main/view_ite..._id/dawestside There we go. __________________ My Homepage.

10-15-2008	#5
Mr GorpThorp Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 402	Re: My Writing A good start for an author- my advice would be to refrain from using the more juvenile breast terminologies during narration (like boobies) unless the character is speaking the word. Also feel free to make them longer, you have some good stories that you could stretch the plot out some on. Time allowing, of course. I'm interested to read more... __________________ Gorp. Thorp.

10-16-2008	#8
dawestside Leecher Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 9	Re: My Writing I might post a full rant in the correct section tomorrow. Writing.com has now stated my limititation of entries is full. So I'm going to copy a guys idea from the Tf section of the forum and post all new stories in this thread. So please, as soon as this begins to grate on anybodies nerves please tell me. I usually post a story a day. Don't you just love entusiasm. Also by doing this, I hope to create free readable content for people too low on DA MONEYZZZZ to afford the BEArchive. Thanks alot, dawestside. __________________ There should be a Rick Roll where the womans boobs grow.

10-17-2008	#9
dawestside Leecher Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 9	Let me introduce you to my running series across many websites. Megan and Libby! Yeah... How anticlinatic that was.... Her ya go! Appreciation, hate and critism welcomed like a horny 19 year old blond. Libby was looking on the Internet for something to amuse her. She'd been at it for an hour and eventually gave up and went to get something to eat. "Megan!! Did we get those biscuits?!" Libby yelled from the kitchen, Megan screamed back, "Yeah, there in the cupboard! Next to Jeff's lady magazines!" Libby opened the cupboard and found her prize. She was distgusted by Megan for letting Jeff bring the pornography into the house. Shurruging off the anger and placing her Shapley derrihair on the couch, she tucked in. "Woah, these biscuits are amazing!" Muffled Libby through her full mouth, swolloing she ran up stairs to Megan's room. "Knock knock, you got to try these---" Libby was shellshocked. Megan was there, sitting and rubbing massive breasts. "MEGAN, WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED?!?!" Libby was so furious that her friend would have done this to herself. "Mmhmm, Libby... Huhuhu... Biscuits.... Boobs..." Libby soon discorvered what Megan meant. She felt her top tightening. Her bra was shoveling into the skin. "Oh my god... This can't be happening..." puffed Libby. She was lurched forward by the immense weight of the flesh. They had grown from already large Cs to immence Es in a matter of two minutes. "Oh... OHOHOHOH!" Libby felt her skirt snap as her arse wobbled outwards. Her shirt was in tatters as her skin on the back wriggler and squiggled around on underneath the straining and stained bra. Her arms fattened up along with her legs. The back burst the bra as it rose and the stomach inflated. "Libby... How much... Oh Shit!" Megan saw her breast increase more as milk dripped from her nipples. Meanwhile, Libby was moaning as her stomach increased further and her entire body was a bulbous blob. The breasts continued there growth and stopped at the size of a skip, shoving everything to the side and smashing the glass on the window. "MY LEGS! LOOK!" The legs were growing and were still gaing wieght, her stomach stopped andnher nipples stood the size of a man. "Oh FUCK!" Libby couldn't stop her swearing as she felt the milk squirt out like a fountain, and then gushed out like a hose. It sprayed everywhere until they both passed out. Morning came as did Megan the previous evening, and Libby found the ability to walk. Both girls were size V breasts by the official health society, as found on Google later, but Libby was rushed to labour as she gave birth to 12 children and was featured on the news. She was standing with the news reporter and her height had increased by several foot, her arse had become firm and hard and the stomach had vanished. "This was Charlie Charlseon, reporting live from The Hospital." Off camera, Charlie left a pack of chocolates for the secutary. "Ohhhhhh..." came down the corridor. __________________ There should be a Rick Roll where the womans boobs grow.