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Attempts at BE.
Okay so I am working on things, critiques are welcome, this one is B&W becuase its all pencil but I might get it colored out later. Tried to take in mind some of the things you guys said and still playing with the anatomy and stuff, but anyway here you go.
Coundn't think of a theme. ::chuckles::so went with the obvious one. |
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04-18-2006
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Classic Alice-in-wonderland based dues-ex-machina.
I approve! |
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04-18-2006
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attempts at BE very well, i'd say
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04-18-2006
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A lovely peice,don`t see anything wrong with it at all.
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04-18-2006
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Very uniquely done. I can't put my finger on it, but your pencil style is very neat. X3
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04-18-2006
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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The look of surprise and the shooting buttons are both great techniques. Also, I love her expression, her face and figure are excellently done.
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04-18-2006
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Process Disciple
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Very nice style indeed
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04-19-2006
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Wonderfull. I like it.
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04-19-2006
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*applauds* very well done, hope to see more ^_^
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04-19-2006
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Nice job! Your attempt is a success. ^^
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04-19-2006
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First attempt? Could have fooled me
 Very nice. I think perhaps the only thing that might have added to the effects - the surprise, buttons and straps - would be grossly distorted writing on the t-shirt. That would just be icing on the cake though. An excellent piece and I agree with Sutibaru, lovely pencilling. |
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Very well done. Remnds me of the story "Alice in Titterland" by Noble Sword.
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