New Story: An Unexpected Evolution

[Shadow_Dragon]

Hey guys, so some of you know I've written a few passages in the past without ever going through with them.

Well that has ended now with first official-sort of novel-style story I am working on.

Here is the first chapter of it, the second chapter, which includes much more action, process, sex stuff will most likely follow in the days ahead.

Enjoy.


https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1GT...VJOUtZZWc/edit

[frice2000]

Interesting start. Perhaps could have used a little more descriptions on your characters and a few more personality traits. But overall was pretty interesting. Thanks for sharing.

[Shadow_Dragon]

Thank you, you will most likely have more character development in the coming chapters.