Yard Work (Part Three complete 8/1/13)

[Dreamtales]

Yard Work Part Two is ready! More adventures of older brother Luke and his bratty (and rapidly growing) younger sister Amy.

It's hard to classify this comic by genre, but it does include Age Progression, Female Growth, Shrinking (female and male) and what looks like AR (female and male).

In Part Two:
Luke’s gradual shrinking continues;
Luke and Nicole take a shower in Weed Shrinker;
After a romantic interlude, Nicole washes off with Super Gro;
Amy's teasing kicks into high gear as Luke keeps shrinking.

Yard Work Part Two has 38 color pages and costs $9.99. You can see get more info and buy the comic on my web site:

http://www.dreamtalescomics.com/Blog...yard-work-two/

[Masterbt2]

If you are a fan of AR and AP this is the comic for you, The process occurs from the beginning till the end of the comic. I recommend to everyone.

[marthlord54545]

Originally Posted by Masterbt2

If you are a fan of AR and AP this is the comic for you, The process occurs from the beginning till the end of the comic. I recommend to everyone.

That's nice to know, but I'm a bit short on cash. I'll wait until I have enough to buy this, but one question for Dreamtales

When is "The Puberty Fairies" going to come out? I'm sorry if I'm being a pest about this, it just the more I read the description the more I want to see it ^^;

[jeffr_2bya]

The male Ar is coming along and there was some brief female Ar. I really hope there is more female ar coming up soon.

[impaction1967]

This was really good! The ar was excellent!

[Crash Ichimonji]

Originally Posted by jeffr_2bya

The male Ar is coming along and there was some brief female Ar. I really hope there is more female ar coming up soon.

Yeah, but the Female AP was also a nice addition. Plus the sister and mother are becoming sexier and taller.

[Katsumend]

Dreamtales is a genius

[Crash Ichimonji]

I also liked how the doctor told them to only drink bottled water, so that means there's still going to be more showering with the weed-wilting and plant-growth chemicals.

Okay, calling it now: the mom is gonna get turned into a kid from getting spritzed with the weed-wilter.

[vended]

It was great ! Really good work !

There was only a few things which bothered me.
Luke and Nicole relationship seemed to be that of long time lovers when they only met yesterday as far as the reader know. Being ok with stripping naked in front of each other and "hey, let's make love" would have been more realist with only a few narrative lines saying they did start dating and expanding the time between each parts to a week.
That or I'm getting too old.

In an handful of drawing, Luke seemed suddenly way scrawnier than before, and back to 'normal' half scrawny just after Nicole's shower. I don't know for the other readers, but it was enough non continuity to make me look back twice.

Finally, there was a lot of female nudity yet no male nudity at all below the waist. When (if) he grow back, If readers aren't afraid of the sight of a penis, it would be nice.

But that's only a few things I t noticed, don't get the wrong idea, the artwork was amazing, the story great and the hindsight of what will come too, I feel my money wasn't wasted at all and like many of us here I can't wait to see more.

[Janus Steel]

The pacing of this is off in this version, not that it's a bad thing, and IMO should probably be addressed for us the reader.

Example, the sister gets sprayed like 4 times in the first couple of pages yet she doesn't seem to grow NEARLY as quickly in the second story as Nicole does. Now it can be argued that Nicole having been exposed to the water/older/different genes takes some time to mature. Which we see happening in the first story.
And not to give spoils but in her AR & AP sections it happens in minutes what took the Luke's sister like days and judging by how quickly she lost her curves I would have expected Luke to be smaller than her.

By the way I love the tie in to the Something in the Water.
So far I'd say this is the best comic I've purchased from you DT. Keep up the work and I'm hoping my questions are answered in the 3rd installment.

[Adobeman10]

I liked it much better than the first one. I could care less about Male AR-as I am sure MOST of the buyers are. I like more of the transfer between the girls with the sister getting hotter and the neighbor losing attributes. Would've liked a version of this where Luke was actually a girl and it was sisters trading places. That would;ve been much more enjoyable.

I miss the old ones where the younger sister was able to outgrow the older sister and caused them to be confused with one another. Would love to see more of the humiliation aspect of it all.

[marthlord54545]

Just brought it a few hours ago, and it's better than the first. I do like the changes in size and age of the character especially the relationship change with Luke and his sister, where Luke teased his sister but now it's her turn to tease Luke.