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Join Date: Aug 2014
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New Story
Hello
Iīve written a BE-story, youīll find it here http://johndoe1974.tumblr.com/ Itīs written in german cause my english isnīt the best... ![]() I hope you like it ![]() |
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: New Story
Anyone able to help us out with a translation?
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Thom Didamus
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: The Midwestern United States
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Re: New Story
It seems an interesting premise. From my poor German, it's set in a world 100 years in the future. Food is scarce, so they make supplements from breast milk. So they increase women's breast size so they can produce more milk. After that my grammar went bad and they started having conversations I couldn't understand.
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Join Date: Mar 2014
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Re: New Story
Best german be story I know so far, I enjoyed this, itīs a very good story, but why did you use inches and feet as measuring unit?
I mean itīs written in german why not use centimetres and metres... I hope you write more stories like that |
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