Boat (unfinished)

[Robopengy]

It's been awhile since I shared something, so here's an older unfinished commission I've had for a bit. You'll notice some change in style and some inconsistencies, that's because the four pages were drawn over a long period. Unfortunately the artist could never finish and we were left with quite the cliffhanger! Hope you all enjoy!

[jack36262001]

Interesting, the art kind of makes me think 80's manga.

[Blackbat]

looks really good, great lines used

[Silver Spoon]

Looked very promising, and what is there looks fantastic. Too bad it didn't get finished.

[Obsidian]

Even if incomplete, this is still a nice treat. Thanks for sharing.

[MadDemon64]

Let's see now, given her size at the end of the third panel, that shark is bound to be no longer than her forearm.

[hexen]

The story of Titanic could benefit from this ^^.

[Lex]

I like how the last panel makes it look like the shark poses a threat, when I would assume the next panel would've been a wide shot where she just flicks it away like a flea...

[RedJack]

Very nice, though it is sad to know it will never be finished, but thanks for sharing period.

Originally Posted by Lex

I like how the last panel makes it look like the shark poses a threat, when I would assume the next panel would've been a wide shot where she just flicks it away like a flea...

Also I would like to believe she continues to grow and the shark quickly finds himself trying to take a bit out of a meal that is FAR too huge now O_O

[Robopengy]

Originally Posted by MadDemon64

Let's see now, given her size at the end of the third panel, that shark is bound to be no longer than her forearm.

Originally Posted by RedJack

Very nice, though it is sad to know it will never be finished, but thanks for sharing period.



Also I would like to believe she continues to grow and the shark quickly finds himself trying to take a bit out of a meal that is FAR too huge now O_O

Well you two have pretty much surmised what the next few panels/pages were going to be. But can anyone guess how it ended?!

And yes, too bad it won't be finished. But if any talented volunteers were to come forth I think we could do something

[RedJack]

Originally Posted by Robopengy

Well you two have pretty much surmised what the next few panels/pages were going to be. But can anyone guess how it ended?!

And yes, too bad it won't be finished. But if any talented volunteers were to come forth I think we could do something

Really now? That's pretty cool that MadDemon64 and I pretty much have the next panels/pages were going to be. But as far as guessing how it would end, I would possibly say she continues to grow till she can stand in the ocean and the boat she was originally standing on, is nothing more than a toy compared to her now. But that is just a rough guess.

I wish some talented volunteers would come forth to finish this, that would be nice

[Robopengy]

Originally Posted by RedJack

Really now? That's pretty cool that MadDemon64 and I pretty much have the next panels/pages were going to be. But as far as guessing how it would end, I would possibly say she continues to grow till she can stand in the ocean and the boat she was originally standing on, is nothing more than a toy compared to her now. But that is just a rough guess.

I wish some talented volunteers would come forth to finish this, that would be nice

Close again! She was going to end up standing on the ocean bottom and then grow large enough so the ocean is just below her belly button and a nearby cruise ship going by was about a fourth of her size. Much to her embarrassment, there are a lot of people on deck to see her.

Maybe someday