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Yard Work Part Eleven
38 pages, Color, US$10.99
Age Progression, Shrinking Men Artwork by Yuan at Arieta Studio This chapter introduces two new characters and answers the question “Hey, didn’t Amy have some little friends?” In Part Eleven: Before he shrank, Amy’s two cute little friends Kaitlin and Bethany had a big crush on Luke. When they return, they are thrilled to find him reduced to their size. More complications arise as the two girls mess around with some Super-Gro! Yard Work Eleven is mostly Age Progression, with plenty of teasing and role playing fun. You can get more info and buy the comic here. http://www.dreamtalescomics.com/Blog...d-work-eleven/ It is also on my new Selz store: Dreamtales Selz Store |
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Join Date: Aug 2013
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
love this series especially mom is amazing in it !
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Richmond, Virginia
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
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But I only have one thought about this story. The brother seems very pervy considering he watches the process. I'm just saying it made me a little uncomfortable to see this college age kid. The art seemed a little odd for the girls as well, like in some parts it was rushed. But I did love the facial changes for the little girls.
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Wasilla, Alaska, US
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
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![]() The one on the left seems to tall according to her facial dimensions and the one on the right, her breast lines don't match her figure. I think this scene really shows it the most, but these types of things appear frequently through out the comic. It's a little odd is all I'm saying.
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Join Date: May 2014
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
really nice work , i enjoyed the mom's scenes .
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 27
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
I was kind of disappointed. For me I guess I want the comics to be more R/X rated, and this was very PG. It would be great though if you did include a rating system for future purchases.
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Join Date: Oct 2011
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
Until the artists are willing to draw more adult material either in this story-line or something else entirely, these comics are not worth your money. The art is getting progressively worse as the series progresses, as well the actual depicted process. And when it does go into an adult direction, it is completely wacky (IE: Ep.10, Nicole and Luke shrink so much due to a spray they need to use Luke's Mom vaginal juices as a water slide to wash off the shrinking chemical).
If you buy process pornography for porn, this isn't for you. Last edited by Dex164; 05-18-2015 at 02:27 PM. |
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 78
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
I'm with you in how the new girls' art was a little simple during their early growth.
But actually, I was going to use the Ep. 10 story as a positive example of how the story can be full of process fetish fuel... I thought that episode was pretty great and I'm not usually into SW (more growth/AP/BE... although SW is always a good tension-builder for growth later). Loved that there is an episode devoted to sexy AP, but it was too bad it was only one moment (story-wise) of process, and drawn from not the maximally-revealing/indulgent angles. Or the two sticks with semi-circles drawn on them. : ) Don't lose heart, dreamtales! Loved the investment in AP. Keep at it, all of it. |
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Bouncy Dragongirl of Love
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
I enjoyed it. Actually prefer the lack of super-adult stuff to Dex's taste.
Wouldn't have minded more drawn/indulgant though.
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
Personally, I rather see more of the Shrinking episodes, the adult content is easier to feature than in AR. If the girls took advantage of Luke in his younger state and ha their way with him, I'd imagine it would make some people uncomfortable (even if technically he's an adult in a younger body).
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Join Date: May 2007
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
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This series started with awesome artwork, but I don't think I'll be buying any more chapters unless it improves and there is any old2young AR/IB again. |
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