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Join Date: Jun 2008
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The Ring: Part II
The long overdue second part to The Ring is now available. It includes a certain variety of processes but the focus as always is still on breast expansion.
"It's day two of women transforming into busty beauties and just when Mark thinks he is finally getting used to his new world, things take an unexpected turn." NOTE: Also includes a revised version of Part I as well. ---- You can download the story to read at my website here: http://dynamoob.wix.com/digitalpinups#!stories/cfvg It's also available at TheOverflowingBra.com http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=645 I hope you guys enjoy the continuation of one of my earlier works.
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Very Melon
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: In the dark place in your mind
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Re: The Ring: Part II
Yes! Yes!
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Corona Valley
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Re: The Ring: Part II
Ah ok, you combined both parts in one file
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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Re: The Ring: Part II
My review on The Overflowing Bra:
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One thing I really enjoyed because it was unexpected was the change to Barbara, the woman who'd rear-ended him -- the way her encounter with Mark was described at the very beginning of Part I had actually made me wonder if she was a witch who had been the cause of everything, by somehow enchanting Mark's class ring. Apparently not, though (well, unless her enchantment went way out of control). I do have a couple of minor issues, though: 1. The ring says "Change the World," but we never really get see anything beyond Mark's own life. Obviously, we can assume things are quite different if "Fellatio 401" is a class that's offered at an accredited high school... but it would have been nice to have at least a small glimpse of the wider world. (And, yes, I realize Mark may be inside a "bubble" and everything is perfectly normal outside his town, or something like that.) 2. I don't care how many schoolgirls you get to have sex with, I think getting aged from 18 to early 30s is a bad deal. Or maybe I'm just saying this because I'm past my early 30s? I guess we can probably assume Mark's "girls' school headmaster" life isn't permanent, although unless I missed something, no transformation has been reversed, just added to. I know, I know, the "Embrace the New You" note should probably be taken as a signal that everything's going to work out -- and hopefully there will be a Part III before too long that addresses some of this. |
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